Term 1 2014 Written Language

WALT write a timed recount about a time when we did something special with our whanau or family.
Write about:
·      when and where you did something special
·      who was with you
·      what you did (think about the order you did things)
·      how you felt and why you felt this way.

By Liam Scott
Going to Wellington.

One day my mum and dad decided that we should go to a place that we had never been to before and it was Wellington. Then the next morning mum called the airport then we all started to pack our bags. Mum helped me pack my bag and I bought something that I like.
Then the next morning we went to the airport. When the plane took off after a few minutes I started to cry and I almost cried the whole way. When we got off I was not crying.

Next steps
What was it that you took with you that you liked?

Add some more details to explain why you were crying.
What else did you do in Wellington?

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